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Sep. 20th, 2013 11:04 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kittygamble'Peace On Earth' was rejected.
I can't say I'm surprised. In the days before I submitted I knew it wasn't really working the way I wanted it to. 8,000 words was not enough to get what I wanted to say across. There are three characters who all have lots of things to work through, and I couldn't focus on all three of them as much as I knew I needed to.
Oh, well. I'm going to go back to it when I finish editing the other things and make it long enough to tell their story properly. Maybe it'll be what someone's looking for then.
I can't say I'm surprised. In the days before I submitted I knew it wasn't really working the way I wanted it to. 8,000 words was not enough to get what I wanted to say across. There are three characters who all have lots of things to work through, and I couldn't focus on all three of them as much as I knew I needed to.
Oh, well. I'm going to go back to it when I finish editing the other things and make it long enough to tell their story properly. Maybe it'll be what someone's looking for then.
